Well done Keelan, I've enjoyed reading your story, it flows really well. I've often seen wonderful artwork that goes with the story of Maui and the Sun. Good job on your marks for punctuation and vocab etc.. . Did you work out your own marks or did your teacher help you?
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Well done Keelan, I've enjoyed reading your story, it flows really well. I've often seen wonderful artwork that goes with the story of Maui and the Sun. Good job on your marks for punctuation and vocab etc.. . Did you work out your own marks or did your teacher help you?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Katelin. I hope you enjoyed my story. Maybe i could check out your blog and see if you have some cool writing.
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